Mum Stepped........

Walt: Use better words.

Mum stepped on the stage and sang her heart out on X factor New Zealand. The judges loved her and said to her that she was dazzling.

They gave her four yeses and said that she was going to boot camp. When she heard that she made it in she burst with amazement and couldn't wait to start. One week later boot camp started and she was ready to sing. When it was her time to sing she sang spectacular and the judges put her into the semi-finals. Two weeks later it was time for semi-finals. My mum’s heart started panting. Her hands were getting numb.

She was facing other contestants . It was her time to sing she sang with all her energy and rocked the crowd. The judges judged her performance and said that she was in the finals.Three weeks later it was finals week and my mum was in the finals. She was practicing her song then her vocal cords were playing up. When it was her turn to sing she could feel her air getting thicker and thicker. When it was time to sing she froze..... To be continued.