Walt: write a story in sequence.
Jump gone wrong.
One dusky evening a bloke called James Mackentie attempted a daredevil jump called the space jump. Mission control were checking if everything was alright. Then it was time to jump.
“3, 2, 1, JUMP!”
In freefall mode I broke the sound record while I was flipping in mid air. I tried to stay stable then out came the parachute. There was a glitch, something went wrong then I saw my self falling to my death. While i’m falling i’m thinking about my wife and my kids. Then I see land. I sob because I might splat on the hard rocky pavement then I hear Mission control talking to me.
“James we know what the problem is There’s a hole in the parachute you have to patch it up!”
I grabbed the cellotape out of my backpack and patched the hole then my parachute was back to normal again. I landed in New Mexico and was amazed that I conquered the space jump. I landed on my two feet and cried with joy and then I went to kiss my wife. Mission control puffed with relief and then came out to shake hands and hug me then I get reported by reporters. They ask me Questions then I answer.
“I know that I am dangerous and I am risky and I want to break records. That’s why they call me James Mackentie the space jumper!”
The message of this story is to don’t be afraid.
1 comments:
That's really good Devonn. I really like the problem because you used the cellotape to patch up your parachute. If you were James Mackentie falling to his death how would you feel?
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